Yeah, nothing is without it’s flaws and some people will probably find plot holes in the story somewhere. (If that’s what you were referring to, if it’s just stuff like any grammar or even spelling. I must admit that I was never the best with that. My average in English classes were C’s because I commonly made mistakes on stuff like essays)

I just ask for enjoyment of the story. Even some of my favorite FiM Episodes have some glaring Plotholes. So I just hope that for most people any complaints they may have don’t let them entirely ruin the enjoyment.

I do welcome anybody who could tell me if there was something I overlooked in the story. As long as they’re not pointing out everything wrong with malicious intent.

I don’t really consider myself as one of the best writers. And some constructive criticism is probably good. Even if I doubt I’ll ever do another large story like Return to Saddle Arabia. It could be useful for anything even if it’s in smaller amounts with writing in the future. I don’t have a long history of making fanfics and this is the closest to one I’ve ever done (Though I suppose the entire blog counts as a fanfic even if it’s a little more then that. A fan comic when the sprite images are used)